I took this one out:
beautiful, watercolor-inspired blooms
My feeling: the comma makes it sound as though all beautiful blooms must be watercolor-inspired.
(Even though it's probable that all watercolor-inspired blooms are beautiful--but then this reminds me that blooms aren't inspired by anything--they just grow following Mother Nature's present plan; I'll have to fix that)
1 comment:
I would leave the comma in.
'beautiful watercolor-inspired blooms' seems to suggest that the blooms were inspired by beautiful watercolors, rather than being beautiful themselves.
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